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Post by That Chick on Mar 24, 2006 19:00:12 GMT -1
i need criticism. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. which i know y'all love giving me.  |
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Post by Kanenite on Mar 24, 2006 19:05:38 GMT -1
Her face looks a bit thin, and does she have feet? 'part from that it's good, like.
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Post by That Chick on Mar 24, 2006 19:08:51 GMT -1
heh, i ran outta paper so no, she has no feet. its in the style of Ken Akamutsu, will find the image in a moment, which explains the coat and the antenna.
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Post by That Chick on Mar 24, 2006 19:15:39 GMT -1
ok, b ook cover of the coat thing:  Kitsune, the girl with one antenna (naru has two):  |
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Post by Ultimafanatic on Mar 24, 2006 19:32:24 GMT -1
The face is probably the worst feature, but not too bad considering, it could simply be fuller. Try some subtle colouring aswell if you can.
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Mar 25, 2006 10:01:07 GMT -1
Too be honest, I don't think the drawing is that good. The only slightly difficult thing to draw on anime is the eyes, and that's easy anyway. The shading is quite poorly done and she looks too thin.
Good points are the Japanese writing looks OK, and you're signature looks pretty tidy.
Not bad.
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Post by That Chick on Mar 25, 2006 19:20:36 GMT -1
1. i cant believe i just posted my signature on the internet.
2.its just a prem, i'm colouring it.
3. The japanese sucks, considereing it sa\ys "girl" and "raining" in a set of characters only half of the japanese people can actually read.
4.MANGA. Anime is the animated one.
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Mar 25, 2006 19:48:35 GMT -1
Manga, anime.
It's all the same.
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Post by ~Tr1st@Inactive. on Mar 26, 2006 7:27:33 GMT -1
True, they are both cartoon  |
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Post by † Gabriel †CSS Zombie Killer on Apr 1, 2006 9:30:18 GMT -1
dood, take this however u like, but broaden her, make her face, torso and hips wider, but only a little, i draw Manhwa, korean manga if u will, and u just gotta tweek little things till it looks right IM wen eva vampire_ben@hotmail.com |
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