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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Dec 5, 2006 16:40:37 GMT -1
Ya, I need one of you to type up both the poems, or scan them in.
I forgot to take them out of my folder, so I only have my first draft with me and just saw that she'd written "ned textaul evidance lul" all over the place.
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Post by Ayce_13 on Dec 5, 2006 16:54:14 GMT -1
You can find 'em on google if you search.
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Post by That Chick on Dec 5, 2006 17:02:22 GMT -1
COUSIN KATE
by: Christina Rossetti (1830-1894)
WAS a cottage maiden
Hardened by sun and air,
Contented with my cottage mates,
Not mindful I was fair.
Why did a great lord find me out,
And praise my flaxen hair?
Why did a great lord find me out
To fill my heart with care?
He lured me to his palace home--
Woe's me for joy thereof--
To lead a shameless shameful life,
His plaything and his love.
He wore me like a silken knot,
He changed me like a glove;
So now I moan, an unclean thing,
Who might have been a dove.
O Lady Kate, my cousin Kate,
You grew more fair than I:
He saw you at your father's gate,
Chose you, and cast me by.
He watched your steps along the lane,
Your work among the rye;
He lifted you from mean estate
To sit with him on high.
Because you were so good and pure
He bound you with his ring:
The neighbours call you good and pure,
Call me an outcast thing.
Even so I sit and howl in dust,
You sit in gold and sing:
Now which of us has tenderer heart?
You had the stronger wing.
O cousin Kate, my love was true,
Your love was writ in sand:
If he had fooled not me but you,
If you stood where I stand,
He'd not have won me with his love
Nor bought me with his land;
I would have spit into his face
And not have taken his hand.
Yet I've a gift you have not got,
And seem not like to get:
For all your clothes and wedding-ring
I've little doubt you fret.
My fair-haired son, my shame, my pride,
Cling closer, closer yet:
Your father would give lands for one
To wear his coronet.
dunno what the ohter one is, i think luke told me but i cant be bothered.
i pasted it btw im not THAT sad.
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Dec 5, 2006 17:04:08 GMT -1
Thanks guys.
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Post by Ayce_13 on Dec 5, 2006 17:05:29 GMT -1
^ Twattish 19th damn century poem sh*t, i'm doin' my redraft now n all.
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Dec 5, 2006 17:06:36 GMT -1
^ Twattish 19th damn century poem sh*t, i'm doin' my redraft now n all. It's not too hard, as she's written on my sheet exactly what I need to do in the areas that need work. |
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Post by That Chick on Dec 5, 2006 17:07:16 GMT -1
ugh i had to compare the way the author presents love in six sonnets, i chose really emo ones and im just like "these all agree love causes suicide"...
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Post by Kanenite on Dec 5, 2006 17:11:53 GMT -1
^ Twattish 19th damn century poem sh*t, i'm doin' my redraft now n all. It's not too hard, as she's written on my sheet exactly what I need to do in the areas that need work. She basically wrote "Fuck you" on mine  |
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Post by Ayce_13 on Dec 5, 2006 17:16:53 GMT -1
Nah, nah, nah, now seriously, i get pi55555ed of when she does this. I got all this damn genius stuff written down, n then next to it shes just put "Evidence? Evidence? Evidence? Evidence? EVIDENCE?!?!?!?!?" *Curls up into little ball and sits in the corner*
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Dec 5, 2006 17:25:32 GMT -1
Nah, nah, nah, now seriously, i get pi55555ed of when she does this. I got all this damn genius stuff written down, n then next to it shes just put "Evidence? Evidence? Evidence? Evidence? EVIDENCE?!?!?!?!?" *Curls up into little ball and sits in the corner* Same here. There's plenty of evidence, there's like twelve lines I've quoted. |
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Post by Kanenite on Dec 5, 2006 17:27:09 GMT -1
See, though, she was nice today, but on paper it's like "I'm hard, you twats. ur not guna pa5 ur gcses lol", and I'm like "go and die bitch".
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Post by Ultimafanatic on Dec 5, 2006 18:41:19 GMT -1
I have to re write mine, like completely over-haul it. But I can't be bothered...i'll just re type it.
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Post by pezzer123 on Dec 5, 2006 18:50:01 GMT -1
Just finished re doing mine, mine was hard as i had to change it all, what a fag.
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Post by Kanenite on Dec 5, 2006 18:59:13 GMT -1
I've totally re-done mine, although I'm only just nearly starting argument 2. But I'm going to kinda merge some arguments. It's much better this time.
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Post by Cerpin Taxt on Dec 5, 2006 19:01:47 GMT -1
I can't seem to find The Seduction on the internet anywhere, so I'm pretty much fucked as far as those arguments go.
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